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Jul 11, 2008 15:55:07 GMT -6
Post by Sparken on Jul 11, 2008 15:55:07 GMT -6
Hello everyone. This is... I'd say the third time that I'm on a board like this. I mean as in a Proboards forum. I might have been on another one once... but that can wait.
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Jul 11, 2008 16:25:08 GMT -6
Post by Punji the Kobold on Jul 11, 2008 16:25:08 GMT -6
Hello. You can change your name in your profile.
Volo Diviso seems ready for launch, so go ahead and make a character concept.
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Jul 11, 2008 16:39:42 GMT -6
Post by Sparken on Jul 11, 2008 16:39:42 GMT -6
Okay.
Well, my character is also named Sparken. He is a young orphan from earth who was taken by the Venus military. He wasn't trained in any sort of combat though; he was used for biogenetic experiements. His DNA was fused with that of several varieties of cat-based animals from the past, namely leapord for claws, reflexes, and balance and Cheeta for speed. Through an accident, the DNa of a domestic cat was added into the mix, negating the agressive emotions and making him timid. He never had the will to fight so the agressive and territorial behavoirs of the previous two species were implanted in him but the last DNa addition changed that. Whether it was an accident, some sort of joke, or just one of the scientists, wanting to make the boy still retian some of his childish cuteness and behavoir is unsure. However, what was sure was that he wasn't ready for combat. His appearance had changed too. He had a pair of growths on his head that are his new ears (where his original ones were) and he has a tail as well. There is also a patch of cur on his back, possibly a partial mutation. He was marked as a failed experiment and placed in cryogenic stasis. A few years later, he was shipped to a satelite orbiting Venus in order to see if there was any use in him but a malfunction occured and the ship was evacuated. The cryopods were jettisoned, the boy included, and he was later picked up by the earthern government, brought back to his original home.
Um, is this good for a story?
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The PolterGhost
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Jul 11, 2008 18:54:54 GMT -6
Post by The PolterGhost on Jul 11, 2008 18:54:54 GMT -6
f**k, nuts, God, my eyes! All...one big textwall, d**nit!
Question: What do you mean by
Otherwise, it looks fine to me...even if I just got here... >.>
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Jul 11, 2008 19:27:09 GMT -6
Post by Sparken on Jul 11, 2008 19:27:09 GMT -6
The earth government heard of the explosion and sent out a reconnisence team to survey the damage. While doing this, they found Sparken and took him back to earth, the planet he was born on.
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The PolterGhost
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Jul 11, 2008 20:14:26 GMT -6
Post by The PolterGhost on Jul 11, 2008 20:14:26 GMT -6
"And then what?" is what I suppose is what I'm getting at.
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Jul 11, 2008 20:42:23 GMT -6
Post by Prime Spirit on Jul 11, 2008 20:42:23 GMT -6
It'd be where he starts his "sorrowful story" off at?~
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Jul 13, 2008 0:23:00 GMT -6
Post by Anubis on Jul 13, 2008 0:23:00 GMT -6
Some tweaks for cyberpunkiness... Okay. Well, my character is also named Sparken. He is a young orphan from earth who was taken by the Venus military. Allowed to sign his life away before he was old enough to know better. He wasn't trained in any sort of combat though; he was used for biogenetic experiements. His DNA was fused with that of several varieties of cat-based animals from the past, namely leapord for claws, reflexes, and balance and Cheeta for speed. To help control him, the DNa of a domestic cat was added into the mix, negating the agressive emotions and making him timid. He never had the will to fight so the agressive and territorial behavoirs of the previous two species were implanted in him but the last DNa addition changed that. One of the scientists, however, wanted to make the boy still retian some of his childish cuteness and behavoir for... personal reasons. (sorry, couldn't resist) However, what was sure was that Sparken wasn't ready for combat. His appearance had changed too. He had a pair of growths on his head that are his new ears (where his original ones were) and he has a tail as well. There is also a patch of cur on his back, possibly a partial mutation. However, the project was forced to shut down after the scientist in question was torn to shreads by one or more of his, ah, pets. The medics estimated that it took over 18 hours for him to die. Sparken was marked as a failed experiment and placed in cryogenic stasis. A few years later, the buerocracy caught up with his paperwork, and Sparken was retuned to the earthern government, brought back to his original home. Just trying to tweak a few things. People abusing their positions for personal interst, followed by the slow wheels of buerocracy, IMO, fits the setting better than pure luck. I tried to keep most of it intact, though.
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Jul 13, 2008 13:37:39 GMT -6
Post by Sparken on Jul 13, 2008 13:37:39 GMT -6
Can you please let me know about these 'personal reasons'?
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Jul 13, 2008 14:35:23 GMT -6
Post by Anubis on Jul 13, 2008 14:35:23 GMT -6
Um. Shall we say he was well deserving of death by torture, which the other children he twisted to his own desires gave him? (gay sadistic pedopheliac furry rapist)
Anyway, I left it open enough that you could decide he hadn't gotten around to you yet.
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